Post by BlackSunshine on Dec 11, 2005 23:10:47 GMT -5
You said in your announcements that anything we needed changed because a moderator/admin brought our profiles over from the group we could discuss here.
Well, as you didn't update the profile for Lee, I figured I'd make it easy for you and provide the things that should be changed. The things in bold italics[/i] are the things that are different.
Age: 17[/i]
Position: Herald trainee, 3rd year[/i]
Appearance: Her hair is a honey-wheat blond, straight, and feathered from "bangs" that are about long enough to reach just past her chin, gradually getting longer, the final length reaching about midback, and usually held back in a long braid save for the bangs that always seem to fall out of it[/i]. Her eyes are so dark a green that they almost look black, though on a vary rare occasion they will lighten slightly with her mood. Her skin is palish porceline, smooth and creamy, with the lightest smattering of frekles, barely noticible, right along the edges of her cheeks near her temples.
Her frame is tall and lean, whipcord almost. Her limbs are long, the legs of a runner, and arms to match in proportion, with agile, slender fingers. Her waist is small, as are her hips a bit narrow, and her shoulders barely broader than that. From behind, she in fact looks a bit like a straight board, instead of the curves of a girl. She does have some signs of showing feminine curves, though it's apparent that she'll never be amply supplied. However, she does seem to possess a charm and inner beauty that can make up for her less than curvatious outer form, and a sweet, pretty face as well.
Personality: What snobbery she may have once possessed has pretty much left her personality. Her nature now is mostly quiet, but kind and friendly. She's usually a very gentle, small smile on her face when in a good mood, and a sour, professional glare when angered. Otherwise her expression is rather neutral, neither this way nor that.
Lee generally relaxes around those she knows and trusts, and will even let go enough to laugh and have fun. She becomes more talkative and lively then, joking and dancing if the occasion calls for it.[/i]
History
Add to the end: She has now been in the Colligium two years, and after the first hit of her Gift, covered her hands (where her Gift's reception was centered on) with gloves at any time she didn't need them off. As she couldn't learn to shield from her Gift, it being too wild to truly control, she began learning instead to interpret what she saw, and decipher what she was getting the reading from. She still doesn't have full control over her Gift.[/i]
Thanks, much love. And I'll be sending in a new persona for this particular move, if it's okay, for Bardic. A very average and ordinary boy.
I'll save him though, if you'd rather me wait. He'd only be for after the move anyway.
Well, as you didn't update the profile for Lee, I figured I'd make it easy for you and provide the things that should be changed. The things in bold italics[/i] are the things that are different.
Age: 17[/i]
Position: Herald trainee, 3rd year[/i]
Appearance: Her hair is a honey-wheat blond, straight, and feathered from "bangs" that are about long enough to reach just past her chin, gradually getting longer, the final length reaching about midback, and usually held back in a long braid save for the bangs that always seem to fall out of it[/i]. Her eyes are so dark a green that they almost look black, though on a vary rare occasion they will lighten slightly with her mood. Her skin is palish porceline, smooth and creamy, with the lightest smattering of frekles, barely noticible, right along the edges of her cheeks near her temples.
Her frame is tall and lean, whipcord almost. Her limbs are long, the legs of a runner, and arms to match in proportion, with agile, slender fingers. Her waist is small, as are her hips a bit narrow, and her shoulders barely broader than that. From behind, she in fact looks a bit like a straight board, instead of the curves of a girl. She does have some signs of showing feminine curves, though it's apparent that she'll never be amply supplied. However, she does seem to possess a charm and inner beauty that can make up for her less than curvatious outer form, and a sweet, pretty face as well.
Personality: What snobbery she may have once possessed has pretty much left her personality. Her nature now is mostly quiet, but kind and friendly. She's usually a very gentle, small smile on her face when in a good mood, and a sour, professional glare when angered. Otherwise her expression is rather neutral, neither this way nor that.
Lee generally relaxes around those she knows and trusts, and will even let go enough to laugh and have fun. She becomes more talkative and lively then, joking and dancing if the occasion calls for it.[/i]
History
Add to the end: She has now been in the Colligium two years, and after the first hit of her Gift, covered her hands (where her Gift's reception was centered on) with gloves at any time she didn't need them off. As she couldn't learn to shield from her Gift, it being too wild to truly control, she began learning instead to interpret what she saw, and decipher what she was getting the reading from. She still doesn't have full control over her Gift.[/i]
Thanks, much love. And I'll be sending in a new persona for this particular move, if it's okay, for Bardic. A very average and ordinary boy.
I'll save him though, if you'd rather me wait. He'd only be for after the move anyway.